Revision (comma) Moment of Self-doubt
Aug. 5th, 2009 08:18 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
merI am halfway tempted to call off this Major Restructuring Revision and do something much more basic, like just cut wordage and a few (seemingly, in comparison) minor things and pray.
Of course, the patient is on the operating table with his guts in one jar and his heart in a cooler, so of course it doesn't look good. Let's put the thing back together and see how it goes before we start looking for time travel to undo what has gone wrong. Shall we?
Of course, the patient is on the operating table with his guts in one jar and his heart in a cooler, so of course it doesn't look good. Let's put the thing back together and see how it goes before we start looking for time travel to undo what has gone wrong. Shall we?
![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2009-08-05 04:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-05 08:19 pm (UTC)You are reading the old version to tell me if I'm cutting to close to the bone...
no subject
Date: 2009-08-05 08:42 pm (UTC)I used work resources (with permission!) and printed out the whole thing before lunch today, so it should go a bit quicker now that I can read it at lunch, while waiting in court, etc. I'm aiming to have it all read and a nice long e-mail to you by this weekend--is that okay?
no subject
Date: 2009-08-05 09:20 pm (UTC)