Meme

Jun. 13th, 2012 02:13 pm
mer: (Writing Bosoms)
[personal profile] mer
Via [livejournal.com profile] beth_bernobich:

Post your work in progress, page 77 or page 7, lines 7-14, no cheating.

Here is mine, from page 77 of the current draft for HANDBOOK:

"Just east of here... About a mile... There's a dragon's hold."
"A dragon?" Judith shrieked.
"A small dragon!" Parz said, making a calming gesture I'd seen him use on his horse.
"A small dragon?" Judith shrieked.
"It will be fine!" Parz said. "I learned about it back in King's Winter. It's a young beast we can take with just swords and these makeshift spears. It'll be good practice."

Date: 2012-06-14 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beth-bernobich.livejournal.com
What fun! I especially like the calming gesture he uses.

Date: 2012-06-15 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merriehaskell.livejournal.com
I was sad not to post the very next sentence, which is when the narrator figures out that Judith is not shrieking from alarm but from excitement.

Date: 2012-06-16 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beth-bernobich.livejournal.com
Even better!

ETA: Ack, this was supposed to be a reply to your last comment.
Edited Date: 2012-06-16 11:57 am (UTC)

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